Sunday, August 17, 2008

ARE THE CONSUMERS OF DOPING SUBSTANCES TAKING A RISK? (by Mati Bolaños)




At first sight, doping is an efective and external way of improving an athlete’s performance. Particular substances provoque better results in a competition when consumed, but are the consumers of doping substances taking a risk?

First of all, the ingestion of doping substances is conflicting the original idea of the Internacional Olympic Comittee, founded in 1894 in order to promote ethic and pedagogical values in sportsmen and sportswomen. The aim was clear: stimulating the practise of sports and maintaining close links between the different countries.

In 1866, people could see how a cyclist, Linton, from Wales, died during a competition in France due to a overdose of cafeine. In the 50’s the use of dooping substances increased suddenly. And that’s why, timidly, federations started to make anti-doping tests in the 60’s. Sportmen must be concious that the benefits of doping substances do not exceed their negative effects.

Anabolic asteroids ar the most famous substances use in this field. Men create them naturally, since they make the difference between a man and a women during the teen’s. In fact, the anabolic asteroids are used in some fertility treatments. But there are secondary dangerous effects:

In women, they have virilizations and hirsutism effects, change of voice, and menstraul disorders.
In teenagers, they interrupt the growth of bones (this is the main reason why most gymnasts-girls, specially from the former URSS, are so short).
In men, they increase the size of the prostate, cause libido alterions and change the consumer into an agressive man. And, in a long term, anabolic asteroids may force the male body to create female glands and provoque the growth of breasts.
In general, other well-known are high blood pressure (hypertension), heart attacks, hemorrgafe cerebral or sudden death. Moreover, injures in the liver are huge most times.

Anyway, most times, when proffesional sportmen take doping substances, they are more or less concious of what they are doing. However, there are lots of amateurs training in gyms that are exposed to these substances. As one of them (I actually am a Spinning Instructor) I can assure that, in gyms, there are magazines that mainly offer different substances to increase the size of the muscle and guides about the use of them. Once, I stopped to read one of them out of curiosity, and, when I wanted to read about the secondary effects, the explanations were vage and imprecise. In fact, it is extremely easy to get these ‘magical’ pills, most gyms offer them, and most times the gym-owners do not even advise about the using of them. Actually, I have met some gym-owners that are staunch consumers of doping substances. Fortunately, just some of them are!

As a conclussion of this essay, I just want to pint out all the records-breaking sportmen and sportwomen that are nowadays in Beijing (just like Michael Phelps, Federica Pellegrini or Isinbayeva). We can all turn on television and watch how a new world-record is broken everyday! I feel specially delighted, but not for the record itself, but because it has been broken without the use of doping substances.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Mati, I want to do some comments in a positive way.

Be careful with the vocabulary: sportsmen or sportmen?, cafeine or caffeine? anabolic asteroids or anabolic steroids? alterion or alteration? hemorrgafe or hemorrhage? You should revise the vocabulary before publishing...


The first paragraph is very good.

First of all, the ingestion of doping substances is conflicting
( I think it'd be better the present simple, because it is a general conflict, not only in this moment)

...values in sportsmen and sportswomen (after that you will write sportmen). The aim was clear (only in the past?): stimulating the.....

... due to a overdose of cafeine (caffeine). In the 50’s the use of dooping substances increased suddenly. And that’s why, timidly, federations started to make anti-doping tests in the 60’s.

Sportmen must ("should" sounds me better) be concious that the benefits of doping substances do not exceed their negative effects. (here, I 'd write this "their negatives effects are higher than their benefits" because your phrase is a bit...rebuscada. I think)

Anabolic asteroids (steroids) are the most famous substances use in this field. Men create them naturally (don't explain well; in a natural manner?, without special help or intervention?), since...

In women, they have (produce?) virilizations and hirsutism effects, change of voice, and menstraul (menstrual) disorders...

In men, they increase the size of the prostate, cause libido alterions (alterations) and change the consumer into an agressive man (become the consumer more agressive)...

... most times (I've never heard this, maybe: all the times, at all times, frequently, many times, often times.)


Once, I stopped to read one of them out of curiosity (I don't see very clair this phrase)



...We can all turn on (the TV)television...

Your report is very good. Congratulations!.



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Irene Bebop said...

grate job!!!

When I grow up I would try to write like you ^^

I only have two doubt:

"Sportmen must be concious that the benefits of doping" it´s concious that or "concious about" ???

"injures in the liver are huge most times." most times could be there??? I really don´t know but I would have put it at first "Most times injures in the liver are huge."


In my opinion we don´t have to forget that, there are huge interest behind that. it´s a pity that the only think reached with the use of doping substance is thowing rubbish to sportwomen & sportsmen

Anonymous said...

THANK YOU BOTH, ELENA AND AKANE!

AFTER HAVING READ YOUR COMMENTS I HAVE REALIZED THAT MY MAIN MISTAKES ARE:

- SPORTSMEN

- STEROID -> ANABOLIC STEROID

- MOST TIMES -> DOES NOT EVEN EXIST! I do not know where did i get it from. From now on, I will try not to say it again. I really meant: MOST OF THE TIME, but of course, a word like FREQUENTLY fits perfectly, among others. An example: " Moreover, most of the time/Frequently, injures in the liver are huge. " <- By te way, I found an Agata's photocopy with some tips to write a correct article, and one of the sentences said: " Try to use formal words. Ex: instead of 'huge' use 'large'.
Then, I should have said: "
" Moreover, most of the time/Frequently, injures in the liver are large."

- " Anabolic -steroids are the most famous substances useD in this field. Men create them naturally, since they make the difference between a man and a women during the teen’s " <- During the teen's-years the testicules create these substances and that's the reason why boys change their voices and are furrier that women. IT WOULD BE CLEARER LIKE THAT.

- I've tried to found out which is the best option to write after the word 'CONSCIOUS'. I looked it up on two on-line dictionaries and they say that the correct colocation is: CONSCIOUS OF.
Anyway, if you search for 'CONSCIOUS OF' in google it appears as many times as 'CONSCIOUS THAT' or 'CONSCIOUS ABOUT'


THANK YOU AGAIN!!!





Elena: I thought of you when Nadal won the gold medal!

Anonymous said...

Really good post, Mati. The only one errata that the Elena' s brilliant correction was professional instead proffesional.

I enjoyed your article

I believed in olympic spirit until Olympic Games of Atlanta got the games because Coca Cola empire desired them. Until China, got the games, may be IOC prefers money before Human Rights.

(to be continued)

Next comment: doping, in a few hours

Anonymous said...

What happened during the Atlanta Olympic Games???



I want to claim a very-deserved-gold medal for Gervasio Deferr (who finally got the silver-one) that was unfairly-given to a chinese sportsman that is not nearly as good as Gervasio is.

We are not silly! We all have noticed that in those sports wich final results depend on marks given by judges chinese sportsmen and sportswomen get better results than the rest of nationalities (even if they do not deserve them!). And of course, all nationalities commit infringements while playing while China NEVER does!